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A poem about Russia, the largest country in the world (line 2) with 9 different time zones (line 3) and 12 different seas in its territory (line 4). Lake Baikal is the deepest and largest reservoir of fresh water (line 6); largest forest reserves (line 7) and Moscow is Europe’s biggest city (line 9).

The giant of the east, a thorn in the most prosperous continent possessing land so massive which is second to none having each day measured in nine different scales and twelve large waters in full interaction with its borders Its pride feeds on most of European and global superlatives is it from the stores of fresh water or the preservation of the wild plant communities? Is it its rich deposits piled beneath the Earth or its sized capital of huge significance to Europe? This historic nation prides in them all and even more But then, the limbs of its diplomacy are incomplete in such regard, important allies are difficult to come by no room for adjustments- it must be what it wants Georgia and Ukraine’s tears then becoming the pay for its domineering spirit Though not adequately reverenced by the inhabitants of the jungle a hippo still remains more dangerous than the lion well ranked among the frontiers of global authority but a major 21st century bully even in this time of civilization

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/21/2015 5:03:00 PM
Your poems are rich with images and events. They are extremely enjoyable. Had to ponder the third stanza. Am wondering if making the pronoun “its” in the first and final lines more specific would help. Just wondering. . .
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Julia Ward
Date: 4/26/2015 1:54:00 PM
Funom isn't incorrect in leaving out "its" as he has used an adjectival phrase instead. Both methods are acceptable, and in poetry, HIS way of doing it has the edge over your suggestion.
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/26/2015 10:31:00 AM
Thank you so much Graphite Drug... Your comments match my poems and I really enjoy your words too
Date: 4/20/2015 6:25:00 PM
I agree with Rhonda. this is thought provoking and I love the use of hipp!! It made me want to come to this one and check it out.
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/26/2015 10:28:00 AM
Thank you very much Andrea
Date: 4/20/2015 12:19:00 PM
Well-written, thought provoking piece Funom...thank you for visiting my poem today. I appreciate the encouragement! Hugs, Rhonda
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/26/2015 10:26:00 AM
Thank you so much Rhonda Johnshon
Date: 4/20/2015 10:15:00 AM
Definite food for thought.
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/26/2015 10:25:00 AM
Yeah... Thank you very much Kiser
Date: 4/20/2015 9:33:00 AM
Your poem gives us a much needed warning of the danger that Russia presents to the world. 7 // Julia, xx
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/26/2015 10:24:00 AM
Yeah... Thank you very much...

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