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Hip Hop

quick talk timed to the beat doin’ the “Dougie Dance” party pumpin' rhythm ‘n rhymes granny Caryl Ramsdale Copyright © 2011 All rights reserved. Cinquain Poetry Form September 7, 2001

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Nick Bagnall
Date: 9/22/2011 7:11:00 AM
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Conjours up a lovley image :).
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Jack Horne
Date: 9/16/2011 2:00:00 PM
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LOL, what a fun granny - love it : )
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/15/2011 9:29:00 AM
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Interesting work..Enjoyed reading your work..I am glad that I chose this one..I suppose that your comment below means that you will be away a few days..I guess that you are preparing to get your work published..Good luck ..Thanks for letting me know that I placed in the contest..Sara
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Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/13/2011 12:16:00 PM
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Dear fellow poet: Taking a time out while I organize my collection of poetry forms. Be back soon! CR
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Date: 9/8/2011 8:11:00 PM
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What a fun poem. Nice use of alliteration for a rhythmic effect. Good luck in the contest. Karen
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Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/9/2011 10:41:00 AM
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Thanks for the kind comment Karen. CR
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Russell Sivey
Date: 9/8/2011 7:53:00 PM
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This is quite the awesome "dance" poem! I really enjoyed the rhythm and flow of your poem a lot! Very good work!! Good luck in nette's contest!!
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Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/9/2011 10:40:00 AM
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Thanks for stopping by to read and comment Russell. CR
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Wilma Neels
Date: 9/8/2011 2:29:00 PM
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This is cute Caryl.. good luck for Nette's contest ;) Wilma
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Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/9/2011 10:39:00 AM
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This is true lol...Thank you! CR
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Kim Merryman
Date: 9/8/2011 8:35:00 AM
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Nice one Caryl. Good luck in the contest. Kim
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Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/9/2011 10:38:00 AM
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Thank you! CR

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