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Hip Hip Hurray-Debbie's Birthday

Debbie's birthday Hip Hip Hurray, all ku no play National ku day! Hip Hip Hurray gift some haiku, National ku day I write,you too! Gift some haiku chocolate no more, I write you too one,two,three,four! Chocolate no more cake of haiku, one,two,three,four haiku in a queue! Cake of haiku mind your syllables, haiku in a queue how many candles? Mind your syllables not less not more, how many candles behind the back door:) Not less not more must be perfect, behind the back door dump all mistakes! Must be perfect all ku no play, dump all mistakes Debbie's birthday!! © kash poet ============000============= *Wish You a Very Very Happy Birthday Debi. Placement:1st; (September 2012) Contest: It's My Birthday Sponsor:Debbie Guzzi =============000=============

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/2/2012 1:42:00 PM

KASH, , Congratulations with your FUN LOVING POEM for Debbie's "It's MY Birthday " contest bash... had fun reading all her happy dandy winners. Always~ xox~ PD

Lee Ramage

Date: 10/1/2012 9:41:00 PM

Oh, you are so smart... well done. Lee

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/1/2012 6:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Kash. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/1/2012 5:47:00 AM

how delightfully funny, kashi.. super congrats on your win!.. :) huggs

Tahera Mannan

Date: 9/30/2012 10:55:00 PM

Many congrats Kash for this win.

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 9/30/2012 10:11:00 PM

BIG CONGRATULATIONS FRIEND KASH FOR WINNING 1ST PLACE ON DEBBIE’S CONTEST. HAVE A BLESSED DAY ALWAYS!! (^_^)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/30/2012 1:46:00 PM

Big congrats once again kash she deserves all of these lovely poems xx

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/30/2012 12:31:00 PM

Thank you from the bottom of me heart. Mr. Kash ;) Light & Love

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/23/2012 2:36:00 PM

This is so sweet. I know she will like it. Is it going to the contest? Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Charles Henderson

Date: 9/21/2012 11:56:00 PM

Nice string Kash, they are really hard to write.

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/21/2012 8:56:00 AM

Oh, I hope Debbie saw this one! How clever!!

Debbie Duncan

Date: 9/20/2012 2:34:00 PM

great write,,,, and bright blessings to Debbie,,, she explained to me how to write haiku ,,,, good luck on your win ;}

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 9/20/2012 11:34:00 AM

great write, especially as a pantoum. they aren't easy! good luck in the contest :)

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 9/20/2012 9:49:00 AM

wow!!! best birthday poem for debbie :) Good luck!

Jack Horne

Date: 9/19/2012 10:51:00 AM

lol, love this witty write, Kash - I know Debbie will love it too : )

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/19/2012 8:48:00 AM

i got a greeat kick from this, kashi... debbie will surely enjoy your greeting!.. fabulous!!..:) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/19/2012 7:44:00 AM

this is very very clever. I think she will LOVE it. I know I DO!!

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/19/2012 5:33:00 AM

a wonderful poem Kash, and very deserving too!!!!!!!!!!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/18/2012 4:58:00 PM

wow what a fabulous card for our birthday poet Kash .. a super treat of a write she will jump for joy .. good wishes for a big win but this one takes the cake luv ..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/18/2012 2:47:00 PM

Oh Yes,,, Debbie... hip hip horray... happy birthday DG.. this is wonderful of you... love your Libra Spirit..... xox~pd

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/18/2012 2:32:00 PM

So sweet that you make a fuss on the birthdays "girl". I say HOORAY!! oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/18/2012 1:27:00 PM

She is a brilliant poet I must say Kashi! And this poem is quite the special write my friend! I love that you chose a Pantoum form to write your poem, she will like that too! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/18/2012 1:20:00 PM

awwwh, kashi... this one calls for a celebration!... such a winsome write!... winner!..:) huggs

Kash Poet

Date: 9/18/2012 1:06:00 PM

She is my first haiku teacher here!