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Below is the poem entitled Hindsight which was written by poet Black Eyed Susan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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He thought to himself
If I could go back, I’d tell
No one, not even the police, that I’d
Driven by and shot him with ease, 
Silence, would be my clutch, so 
I wouldn’t be judged 
Guilty, nor lambasted like that, by
Hypocrites in mass, for killing a  
Toddler thug, with candy bar drugs

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  1. Date: 4/2/2012 8:57:00 PM
    congrats Susan on winning an HM for this glorious entry luv.. enjoyed..

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 11:22:00 AM
    powerful piece with just the right amount of grit, susan.. congrats on your special win!.:) hugggs

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 10:13:00 AM
    Definitely, a unique take on this Contest! Congrats on your win, Susan! Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 9:18:00 AM
    Go get 'um girl!! ;) Congratulations Susan!! love it!!Big Huggsss,love deb

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 8:24:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in the contest "For Love Of Language" Susan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 6:41:00 AM
    What a way to start a new week seeing all the comments made over the weekend to my poetry. Thank you ever so much for your kind words on my poetry Susan. It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/25/2012 10:01:00 PM
    Susan, this has a bad,, way to life in it... well kind of deep..enjoyed...had 2 read it twice.. ..take care and have yourself a good night~LUV*PD

  1. Date: 3/24/2012 5:20:00 PM
    Magnificent writing, I enjoyed reading your poem Susan and wish the best to you in the contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/24/2012 3:42:00 PM
    Oh! Susan this is so good, harry