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Him

With his cup full to the brim he sat there looking grim He had come here on a whim his intention to have a swim. Yet now he had lost his vim perhaps he left it at the gym. About his figure he liked it trim and his hair he kept very prim. His knees he would skim as trees he tried to shim. As daylight started to dim he went home via the rim.

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Date: 11/18/2014 2:33:00 AM
Excellent. Very interesting write. Thank for sharing it.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/18/2014 2:40:00 PM
ty Ravi glad you enjoyed it hugs
Date: 11/17/2014 3:40:00 PM
great practice in monorhyme and meter, my friend! I want to see your limerick now!!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/18/2014 2:40:00 PM
ty Andrea it was fun to do hugs
Date: 11/17/2014 2:44:00 AM
- A great poem Shadow !! - Have a nice new week :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/18/2014 2:38:00 PM
ty Anne Lise I enjoyed your poem too hugs

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