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Hilltops In the Haze

Coming back home. On your own. Morning mist. In the rain. Nothing is the same. Get going, man, Back home again. Another time, a different person. Cable cars move me down the road. Kites torn and wet on the ground. Hilltops in the haze. Onerous and erroneous, My acrostic a broken cheese grater. Everything's greater at home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 5/15/2021 3:48:00 PM
Love this. I agree with Richard. Great "atmospheric resonance" He sure puts things in a cool way!
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Date: 3/4/2021 7:14:00 AM
I like your poem, it has atmospheric resonance. ;0)
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Date: 3/4/2021 7:13:00 AM
Hi Matt, you inspired me to write a poem. It doesn’t follow your rules but I had fun writing it. I thought you might enjoy giving it a read. Thanks for the inspiration.
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