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Hill House

There's a house upon a hill I swear exist by its own will jagged glass with tattered drapes frame a small, pale child's face Years before, we'd walk on pass throwing rocks, to break more glass but now my friends won't walk this way far from here is were they play But everyday, I walk from school right by this house, no longer cruel careful not to cause offense won't drag a stick across the fence Why, when I walk back home and have to pass this house alone this specter waits to see me still from the house upon the hill But now in fear, I turn away straight ahead I look each day I dare not catch, a glimpse or glance less I be caught up in its trance Cause, by the cloudy light of day this house sits there in shades of gray where signs of life, there is no trace except one small, pale, child's face Penned 09/15/2016

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Date: 9/17/2016 8:06:00 PM
I can picture the child's face in the window....it gives me the chill, like a Stephen King story !! Well done, Jerry!
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 9/17/2016 8:17:00 PM
Thank you Carrie, I drew on advice from Mr. King He said " I always try for creepy---but if that's not working I go for the gross-out
Date: 9/17/2016 1:03:00 AM
Jerry, this gives me goosebumps! :) Very well done, I enjoyed this. I have been away but I'm back for a visit to some of my favorites ...
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 9/17/2016 7:42:00 PM
Nice to have you back Becca, yes Goosebumps was what I was after :)
Date: 9/16/2016 5:54:00 PM
Jerry , I would have sworn I read this already. I guess it's my old age. A very chilling rhyme. Something good for Halloween or a contest:) Great write and good luck!
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 9/17/2016 7:41:00 PM
Dan You're not that old, but I did write this the morning I posted it, but then, I doubt there is any original thought left in this world. Thanks for your comment .
Date: 9/15/2016 2:48:00 PM
A wonderfully spooky poem Jerry. I like it and the addition, sets it off perfectly. A (7) for me and a fav. Sharon
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 9/16/2016 5:41:00 AM
Thanks Sharon, it's always a delight to hear from you.....Take Care
Date: 9/15/2016 9:23:00 AM
Great poem Jerry. I would avoid it too.
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 9/16/2016 5:36:00 AM
Thanks Timmy Have a great day !

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