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enveloped in fog the bonfire night party ends... is life a damp squib ?

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Date: 10/3/2021 8:51:00 PM
Hmm, sometimes I feel like my mind is in a fog. I like this phrase "the bonfire night party ends" This is a cute and clever write. :) Brandy
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Brian Strand
Date: 10/4/2021 12:51:00 AM
A childhood remembrance.Hence still vivid Brandy
Date: 9/29/2021 11:29:00 AM
love the dry humour here in the final line Brian:-) hugs Jan xx
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/30/2021 12:58:00 AM
Thats me I gues,Cheers Jan have a creative day

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