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a silent winter forest hidden bird chirps ... silence again ___________________ December 25, 2022 Poetry/Haiku/hiku Copyright Protected, ID 12-1512-261-25 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, A Hiku Premier sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 12/27/2022 Fifth Place

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/9/2023 11:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Constance. You have perfectly described the sounds in a winter forest and the muffed silence! Happy New Year. Blessings!

Constance La France
Date: 1/9/2023 12:20:00 PM

Sam, thank you so much for the visit, comment, congratulation and compliment, Constance

Hilo Poet

Date: 1/3/2023 11:03:00 AM

Nicely executed, Constance, loving the affecting effects, my friend, Aloha William

Constance La France
Date: 1/3/2023 1:17:00 PM

Hilo, thank you so much for the visit and compliment, Aloha, Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2022 2:28:00 PM

i just really love this one. Congrats for your win

Constance La France
Date: 12/30/2022 1:41:00 AM

Andrea, thank you so much for the visit, compliment and congrats, Constance

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/28/2022 10:03:00 AM

Dear Constance, congratulations for your wonderful win in Brian’s contest with your beautiful Winter Hiku. Warmest wishes for a happy new year.. ~Susan

Constance La France
Date: 12/30/2022 1:42:00 AM

Susan, thank you so much for the visit, congratulations and compliment, blessings for 2023, Constance

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/28/2022 9:33:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. A creative write with few words. Happy New Year With Blessings 2023....................

Constance La France
Date: 12/30/2022 1:42:00 AM

Paula, thank you so much for the visit, congratulations and comment, blessings for 2023, Constance

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/27/2022 5:03:00 AM

I can hear the silence Consrance.' My only complaint.) Being you are a loud writer ' On second thought Scratch that. ' LOL)))

Constance La France
Date: 12/27/2022 8:55:00 AM

Joe, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment, happy you could hear the silence, blessings

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/26/2022 11:48:00 AM

"Lovely" Blessings...............

Constance La France
Date: 12/26/2022 12:19:00 PM

Paula, thank you so much for the visit and compliment, blessings