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***GROWTH*** Blossoms are Spring sweet Red orbs that cover fall down Keep peeling apples. ~~~JOY~~~ New readings today Words not yet well understood Poetry...Supreme! +++ANIMATES+++ Coursing the air bright Burrows in the earth so dark Creatures surprising... ^^^NATURE^^^ Sun's rays warm and bright Moon's harvest fills up the night God adorns the sky! ) ) )WRITING( ( ( Haiku for form now Try to think and count as well My imperfect words--- ###PAST GLORY### Running the bases Tackling the one with the ball Memories enjoyed... < < > > Coaching the new boy Stance back, glove down, go for it Passing the dream on.

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Date: 10/26/2015 10:14:00 PM
A super fan
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Date: 10/8/2010 3:18:00 AM
Congrats Dan on your win with these fascinating haiku series-- and can I say I deeply enjoyed your word play in your title as well! Wonderful :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 10/5/2010 8:25:00 PM
congrats on your nifty little collection here, DAniel, A well deserved win. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/5/2010 2:57:00 PM
Congrats Dan on your big win in the Haiku contest with these expressive Haikus ... enjoy another victory tonight with luv my friend...
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:43:00 PM
Love it Daniel, Congratulations and thanks for supporting my contest. I had lots of fun running this contest,.p.d.
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:39:00 PM
lovely haikus, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:17:00 PM
Congratulations Dan on your win in P.D.'s contest *Going Haiku Crazy*. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:16:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Daniel
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Date: 9/26/2010 5:02:00 PM
Pretty good little collection here, I especially enjoyed last one and Writing! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/26/2010 4:15:00 PM
great collection of haikus Daniel, good luck in the contest
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Date: 9/26/2010 2:49:00 PM
Great work on all your haiku, Daniel. I especially like the "Past Glory" and the "Unsupported Code." Of course, I'm a sports fan so this would appeal to me, but all are very well constructed. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/26/2010 12:40:00 PM
This is terrific! And your title, just drew me in from the get-go !!! So clever!! :)
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