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The camping life is all we need to cherish a vacation The low stretched arms of mountains, spread, have called for our attention Our summer place, serene and free, no worries in our backpacks No need to vent, just take a breath, to relish lodge-pole scent My children play on the water's edge enjoying their own reflections Tossing pebbles, one by one, and soaking in the fun While tossing sticks, our Lab is quick, to run and fetch them all He dives back in, ..we're once again, impressed by such conviction! He's back on shore, he shakes! ... .His chore, is to drench us to the core! Togetherness, envelops us, beneath the midday sun I want to write a poem, a verse.....but cure my own distraction Beholding beauty such as this, would cause the tongue to swell My pen would dry, and so would I, for words could hardly tell Serenity is ours for free, with earth and sky we dwell So overcome with majesty, and tranquil peaks of snow The stillness of a mirrored lake, unlike I have ever known I've put away the waiting pen, and put away my muse For, I hear the family calling me, and though I have excuse It's time to gather kindling wood, for a fire in the pit With s'mores to make, we'll not forsake, marshmallows on a stick!
-------------------------------------------------------- 4//22/15 For Shadow Hamilton's Contest: Memorable Vacations

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/11/2015 8:19:00 AM
Hi Carrie, yours is such a beautiful description of such a beautiful, majestic place you enjoyed with your family. I felt the serenity and peace in your words. Congratulations for your well-deserved First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/9/2015 7:27:00 PM
Congratulations, Carrie. Love Linda
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Date: 5/9/2015 6:49:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations in Shadow's contest. Forever SKAT
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Date: 5/8/2015 5:47:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/8/2015 5:41:00 PM
congrats Carrie on 1st place hugs
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Date: 4/22/2015 7:14:00 PM
Very nice Carrie..We had a vacation just like that when the boys were young..still do...go fishing, campfire. the best time ever. I love what you did with this. BG
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Date: 4/22/2015 4:04:00 PM
Sometimes we need to give our pens a holiday too - such lovely imagery and oh the idea of marshmallows on a stick take me back to my camping days - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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