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Hiding Her Womanhood

A girl just on the verge of puberty Unaware of the pain her body could incur Excited on a train with family Smiling at the countryside Cows grazing in sunlight The train stops at their destination Many getting off- bodies against each other pressed From somewhere, a rough hand grabs her breast Her eyes fill with bleeding tears of pain and consternation Why did she deserve To be groped by a stranger Was her manner wrong? She now walks with elbows crossed Hiding her bruised womanhood Written on:08/30/2016 Contest :'Challenge-Write One' by Broken Wings

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Date: 9/9/2016 9:30:00 PM
Congrats on your win Sara...very nicely penned...
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Date: 9/9/2016 11:36:00 AM
Sara, congratulations on your win in my contest with this sadly truthful poem, wonderfully penned ~
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Date: 9/9/2016 7:56:00 AM
sweet Sara, so terrible! this happens wayyyy too often....congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 9/9/2016 10:22:00 AM
Thanks Laura!
Date: 9/8/2016 8:22:00 PM
Congrats!!! my friend Sara on your fine placement...god bless...^WW^
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 9/9/2016 10:23:00 AM
Thanks dear WW!
Date: 8/31/2016 3:27:00 PM
wow, Sara. that is a really smart write!! I am dying to try this one (if I ever get some private time) Love how you approached this mature topic.
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 9/9/2016 10:24:00 AM
Thanks dear Andrea, I loved your 'late summer baby'

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