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Hide Me Sitting here all by myself I feel this aching need. I've been here so often. Then my soul starts to bleed. Pouring like a summer storm spills raindrops from the skies. Water stains the paper from teardrops in my eyes. It's not because the life I know has become too damn demanding. It's not from sorrow that I face or a lack of understanding. It's just a place I sometimes go as I turn and slip inside me. Hoping that the hope I know for a time will somehow hide me. It's not the painful memories or that I can go no longer. I go there when I'm feeling weak it helps to make me stronger. To see the scars that dwell within and chains that used to bind me. They help to shine a guiding light for all that they remind me. Tomorrow I will rise once more though tonight I take a fall. Looking back behind me now I have survived it all. Edwin C Hofert

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Date: 5/8/2015 3:59:00 AM
A fave so intensely ripping!
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/8/2015 9:39:00 AM
Thank you Carly. :) It's also become a personal fave of mine :) God bless!
Date: 5/7/2015 9:34:00 AM
Damn Edwin! Cut it out You mind blowing sucker!
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/8/2015 9:40:00 AM
LOL Wait until you see what's on my mind for today! :)
Date: 5/2/2015 5:20:00 AM
Such beautiful but sad imagery Edwin - I think many can relate to this but the poem is one of hope the final stanza is uplifting:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/2/2015 6:22:00 AM
Writing poetry gets me through the toughest days - here on soup it is my safe haven:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/2/2015 6:08:00 AM
<3 Thank you Jan. I think we all have that place we're forced to retreat to now and then. That some how gives us strength. :) God bless! Ed
Date: 5/1/2015 10:35:00 PM
love it so real as milk
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/2/2015 12:11:00 AM
LOL Thank you. God bless.

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