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Hidden Within the Laughter

the target of their funny, he laughs back the tears. My second Monoku Written December 8th, 2013 I had originaly written another for the contest but I like this one better.

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Robin Davis

Date: 4/18/2014 8:32:00 AM

Richard Short but very full of power and emotion. The feelings are very clear in so few words. thank you for the great comment on my Deadly Drinking poem.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/18/2014 9:29:00 AM

My pleasure Robin.

Skat A

Date: 3/15/2014 10:16:00 AM

Good morning, Richard.. Congratulations with your one amazing line....~SKAT~

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/15/2014 11:16:00 AM

Thanks SKAT.

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 3/13/2014 9:19:00 AM

Congrats, well done, too true

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/13/2014 9:34:00 AM

Thanks Roger.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/12/2014 9:33:00 AM

Congrats on your winning line..Thanks for the visit to my page with congrats..Sara

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/12/2014 9:53:00 AM

My pleasure Sara.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2014 5:11:00 PM

congratulations for your win, Richard. Now I am curious what the other one was !!! hmmm, I am looking below at my remark to you and it seems I had told you she would prefer the other one. But it's great that you are still on the winners list and this one is very worthy.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/10/2014 5:12:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, perhaps I should have taken your advice.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/10/2014 4:53:00 PM

- One Amazing Line - Congratulations on your fine win, Richard ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/10/2014 5:11:00 PM

Thanks so much Anne Lise.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 12/12/2013 9:31:00 AM

A touching depiction of silent grief

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/13/2013 8:02:00 AM

Thanks Monterey.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2013 11:58:00 PM

I think Broken wings might like that first one better simply because it seems more her style. Now I want to read all four of yours and see MY favorite.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/10/2013 7:17:00 AM

Thanks for the feedback .