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Hidden Truth

A crazy discovery one buzzing bee Look beyond the image circling with light I found a snake entered the garden crawling with hate in his grass blocking his strike after a comment on my personal like a bat coming out of the sun Shallow dripping poisonous darkness you reek I can see behind your mask all words are fake Rather than honey honesty I am real an advance in the human knowledge stands over In false judgement amazing what happens and when one can see Smiling in love even the heart is soaked in sunshine the truth always reveals in Heavenly council Such sadness weeps in the end in the all seeing eye of our creator What it reveals to me bitterness I know one makes mistakes in life never a false poet I pen how it draws

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Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/19/2014 5:54:00 AM

" The hidden truth much more valuable than the apparent." Heraclitus, Greek philosopher, 544-480 BC. If we search for the hidden truth then we have to look up to the heavens, my dear friend, Liam. Hidden truth down on earth is not that important but still is helpful. A deep well-thought poem you have created dear, Liam!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/19/2014 6:29:00 AM

so very true demetrios i sat back and watched something just shook my head and wrote this over a space of time thank you dear friend for the heartfelt words really very inspirational your comment have a great weekend pal

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 12/19/2014 12:55:00 AM

Feeling your pain, Liam...I'm sorry you're going through this but all will work out in the end...big hug sent to you, Rhonda

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/19/2014 6:52:00 AM

it works out perfect how i see it rhonda bless you dear friend have a wonderful weekend

Cherl Dunn

Date: 12/18/2014 6:04:00 PM

Excellent write here my friend great job, cheri

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/19/2014 6:06:00 AM

sorry cherl you reply seemed to have gone to another

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/18/2014 4:45:00 PM

There is a lot in this write, excellent job.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/18/2014 4:45:00 PM

this richard is a true fact even i found it hard to believe smiling wishing you a great evening thank you for the excellent comment dear friend

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/18/2014 4:24:00 PM

Lots to contemplate with this piece Liam.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/18/2014 4:47:00 PM

sorry richard your reply went upwards

Ken Carroll

Date: 12/18/2014 4:03:00 PM

Good share buddy..Reflective and deep..

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/18/2014 4:09:00 PM

you know me ken sometimes you got to speak your mind pal heartfelt comment bless you

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/18/2014 3:55:00 PM

We all misjudge, someone and we are misjudged. It's learning from walking both paths that is what's important. You grow to see the light.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/18/2014 4:07:00 PM

its the light of truth always shines as its true in the end excellent comment dear friend bless you

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/18/2014 2:32:00 PM

Liam....Liam...I'm sorry to read this. I feel the hurt and pain in every line. You know what? Your line....The truth always reveals in Heavenly council is what should give your heart comfort. We will be misunderstood. We will be misjudged. God knows all. Don't become bitter. Stand in the light. Hugs to you

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/18/2014 2:42:00 PM

not bitter eileen just very disappointed in some of the human race who stand and judge another i just pray for their souls so sad to see wonderful comment dear friend bless you pal

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/18/2014 1:23:00 PM

So deep this is Liam!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/18/2014 1:32:00 PM

this is very deep charmaine truth in every word thank you dear friend it upsets me to see such ugliness in judgement on site bless you always pal

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/18/2014 1:26:00 PM

exactly as its drawn is how it is tim thank you deeply pal excellent comment bless you pal

Tim Smith

Date: 12/18/2014 1:14:00 PM

Very deep my friend....you call it like you see it...cheers

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/18/2014 1:28:00 PM

sorry tim you reply went upwards