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Hidden Pain

As he put the bottle to his lips, a little voice told him it was wrong, He already knew this; he'd lost his fight to be strong. His battle was far from over, a war was yet to be fought, He needed this one last drink, he was more than distraught. The bottle called to him, so did the little voice inside his head, He curled up in agony, in the mess he called his bed. As he screamed in pain, his voice hoarse and raw, The bottle slipped from his fingers, he vowed to drink no more. He raised his weary head, from his sweat soaked pillow, His mind and body swayed, just like a weeping willow. He knew he wouldn't survive much longer, in this alcoholic state, He had to confront his demons, or the devil would seal his fate. March 2016

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Date: 9/12/2016 5:00:00 PM
Sad tale, Kay, and so many fight addiction. I read your note to Jan. Sorry to hear of your loss. Addiction is everywhere. Many are addicted to the internet. Relationships suffer. I've recently cut out all coffee... a bad addiction.. I was up to 15 cups a day! Now, just a few cups of tea... good write. Welcome to soup!
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Kay Roberts
Date: 9/13/2016 1:09:00 AM
Thank you Cyndi. Unfortunately there was no love lost between my mother in law and me. However, I did feel sad when she passed 10 years ago, it was more a feeling of what could have been and what she missed out on with her two Grandsons. She chose not to see them, which was a blessing really as she wasn't a very nice person. I hope you don't miss your coffee too much. Thanks again.
Date: 9/12/2016 3:13:00 PM
Such a heartbreaking descriptive write. Addiction of any sort is so destructive to both the addict and also the families and friends who witness it and are helpless to do anything - have seen it with a friend who is an alcoholic:-( :-(hugs jan xx
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Kay Roberts
Date: 9/12/2016 4:16:00 PM
I've also seen this first hand with my mother in law, unfortunately it's what killed her in the end, that and prescription drug dependency. :-( Big HUGS xx

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