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Hidden Mountains

A solo pilot, lost in snow, in a jagged mountain pass. His eyes are trained upon each tree, and the shape of each crevasse… In an open-cockpit time machine, the winter wind does howl, but a mighty fire’s burning bright, inside the engine cowl. The fog and flurry blinding him, he searches for a trail, running late, and miles behind, he’s employed to fly the mail. He looks for clues to lead him back, like ancient, sunken wagon tracks. A mumbled cuss, then shouts out loud, he’s heard that mountains hide in clouds… Now’s the time to pay the toll, for conversations with his soul. One way in, and one way out, it’s true that mountains hide in clouds. Copyright © 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/2/2015 10:58:00 PM
Superb write Cole that's worthy of great win! Big congrats!
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Date: 8/2/2015 8:28:00 PM
Ouch well twisted. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/2/2015 7:05:00 PM
Effective take on the subject and very well written. Enjoyed.
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Date: 8/2/2015 7:36:00 PM
Thank you so much...
Date: 8/2/2015 4:57:00 PM
great tale Cole - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/2/2015 5:38:00 PM
Glad you liked it....thank you
Date: 8/2/2015 4:11:00 PM
Cole Congrats. SK
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Date: 8/2/2015 5:39:00 PM
Glad you liked it....thank you.
Date: 4/25/2014 9:10:00 AM
Your poem has a mysterious suspense that makes my curiosity to grow on what happened next....... Congrats for your piece Cole! :)
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Date: 4/25/2014 12:20:00 PM
Glad you liked this poem of mine...
Date: 4/24/2014 9:33:00 AM
Very apt perspective. Congratulations on the win, cole
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Date: 4/24/2014 4:02:00 PM
Thank you. Glad you liked this one...
Date: 4/24/2014 9:08:00 AM
I enjoyed your tale, congrats!
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Cole Banner
Date: 4/24/2014 4:02:00 PM
Thanks so much...
Date: 4/23/2014 11:46:00 PM
sweet win Cole.... xox..Linda
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Cole Banner
Date: 4/24/2014 4:03:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 4/23/2014 10:47:00 PM
An adventurous story with a tragic ending. Great rhyme and a smooth word flow, as well. Congrats on your win in my contest, Cole!
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Date: 4/24/2014 4:03:00 PM
Thanks. Glad you enjoy my work...
Date: 12/19/2013 1:35:00 PM
Cole, it is amazing to read another poem by you again. . Congratulations, and thank you for supporting the Ballad contest.... Forever- Linda
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Date: 12/19/2013 4:08:00 PM
Thank you so much...

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