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Hidden Love

When i first saw you I looked into your eyes I saw a glow about you I loved all that I could see I love to see your smile Spread across your face But when it fades My hearts starts to ache I like to hear you speak Your voice gives me chills It puts me in crazy state Everything starts to haze Whenever I think of you I drift to a far off place Where anything could happen Where I could love you I didn't know what to say I didn't know how to put it So i tried to hide it but it can no longer be concealed I'll try to say it here and now I'll try to tell you how I feel I love you with all my heart Will you return my love?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/18/2011 8:28:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win in Walayee's fine contest Diana .....:)
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Date: 5/17/2011 4:42:00 PM
Great job Diana. Congratulations on your poem's honor in the winning circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/17/2011 12:30:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in Lay's contest Diana. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/16/2011 8:20:00 PM
hi guys so much thankful on it :)) happy this time :)) COngrats to me!
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Date: 5/16/2011 6:35:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of walayee, Diana
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Diana Keith Libnao
Date: 5/16/2011 8:20:00 PM
Thanks much!
Date: 5/16/2011 4:35:00 PM
Congrats Diane on your winning poem in Lay's cool collaboration contest .. excellent entry full of emotion... enjoy with luv..
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Diana Keith Libnao
Date: 5/16/2011 8:21:00 PM
thank you for congratulating me :))
Date: 4/5/2011 11:07:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry Diana. I enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of it soon. May you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol "
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Date: 3/26/2011 8:53:00 PM
*THANKS FOR THE LIKEY* i should say
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Date: 3/26/2011 8:50:00 PM
Thanks for likey.. i hope i could write more...
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Date: 3/26/2011 4:18:00 AM
ANother sweet write on love and wanting...always Michae
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