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Hidden Key

You know you hurt me These tears flood the pain My mind battles a raging sea My heart, scared to love again and still I hope in vain for a love sweet and strong to right the bitter wrong. I look in the mirror and see your smile once more I whisper, "Come nearer" you vanished like before leaving my heart bruised and sore My heart longs to be free Is death the hidden key? ALesiach © 05/08/2018

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Date: 7/14/2018 7:10:00 AM
Who are you? How have I missed you? Your pen has me in awe!!
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Date: 5/8/2018 8:49:00 PM
Oh Alesia, the pain flows and floods the page with the melancholy ink you spill. The bitter beauty of your poetic lines is so moving and poignant. A deep heart-rending write full of genuinely woeful emotion, my friend.. Warmest wishes to you. ~Susan
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Date: 5/8/2018 6:13:00 PM
Such amazing creativity, Alesia.. Bittersweet rhyme.. Fantastically done!!
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