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Hidden Gifts

HIDDEN GIFTS So long we live within confines self made In patterns of our lives that seem unchanged For safety of familiar curbs we trade Our power where ‘cross parlous world we’d ranged Why hazard chance of failure should we try And risk humiliation when we fold And crumble in embarrassment thereby Then in our shame resolve: no more be bold! Yet life pitches from time to time a blow That gives us choices we would soon deny * Yet when we dare dominion of the throw We find a hidden gift we now can ply Beware when others tell us to take care The caution we adopt may be a snare * I use the word ‘soon’ here with the meaning of preference

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Date: 11/4/2021 8:31:00 PM
Caution is not all it's cracked up to be. As you've said here we may be missing out on abilities. We also miss out on the valuable lessons that failure teaches. As some wise person has said, "anything worth doing is worth doing badly." I am reading through your latest sonnets and you have me thinking and looking up definitions. Thank you for your excellent writing.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 11/5/2021 10:23:00 AM
Thank you very much for your thoughtful feedback, PS. It is very much appreciated.

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