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Seven-Ten
Created by Emile J. Pinet in 2018, (Seven-Ten), (must be centered). There should be a distinctive pattern. Do not use blank spaces to create shape, use words. A non rhyme, twenty two line verse poem with (190 Syllables)- 7 7 10 10 10 7 7 10 10 10 7 7 10 10 10 7 7 10 10 10 7 7 

Hidden flaws are often seen through the lens of an aged eye. When shadows collaborate to hide hate and pretense helps bigotry go unseen, just open your eyes; it's all there to see. A collection of tall tales, history's a flawed teacher. Brutality, savagery, and fear are tactics all potentates rely on, bloodlust and genocide get rewarded. War is a God-given right; all pacifists are traitors! As effective today as in the past, lies are still the preferred motivator, a proven way of controlling people. Man touts His belief in God if it suits His own purpose. Democracy may be designed to fail, for it seems it’s easily overthrown by psychopaths with political might. An ambition admired by dictators; to this day. (Seven/Ten) 5/04/2021

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Date: 5/4/2021 11:50:00 AM
I am not very political but as I watch news boy does this ring a bell. Wise man ! This poems tell me so much...thankyou.
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Date: 5/4/2021 11:53:00 AM
Thanks Virginia, your comments are truly appreciated my friend, Emile.

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