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Hidden Desire

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Hidden Desire

She listens…
But she does not hear my 
She listens…
But she does not hear the 
pounding of my heart,

She looks…
But she does not see my gaze,
She looks…
But she does not see my soul 
drift into her eyes,

She stands close…
But she does not feel my arms 
around her,
She stands close…
But she does not feel my 
breath caress her neck,

She walks away…
My head falls,
She walks away…
She will never be mine,

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  1. Date: 10/27/2010 4:28:00 AM
    Sad...Don't give up who knows what the future holds..I was delighted at your kind comments on my work..Thanks for stopping by ..Sara

  1. Date: 9/11/2010 1:39:00 PM
    A very intense emotional piece Paul... luv the the beginning of each line..each verse... then the line following to utter dismay of the person who is intent with feeling.. enjoyed with luv..

  1. Date: 9/10/2010 4:58:00 PM
    What a beautiful afternoon to sit and read poetry here at PoetrySoup. Please keep writing and sharing your poems with us. What a diverse group of poets we have here I am so happy you are one of us Paul. Have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/10/2010 3:53:00 PM
    nice one, enjoyed your write, wish you the best of your day ahead..P.D.