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Hidden Desire

She listens… But she does not hear my words, the pounding of my heart, She looks… But she does not see my gaze, my soul drift into her eyes, She stands close… But she does not feel my arms around her, my breath caress her neck, She walks away… My head falls, she will never be mine,

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/27/2010 4:28:00 AM
Sad...Don't give up who knows what the future holds..I was delighted at your kind comments on my work..Thanks for stopping by ..Sara
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Date: 9/11/2010 1:39:00 PM
A very intense emotional piece Paul... luv the verbs...in the beginning of each line..each verse... then the line following to utter dismay of the person who is intent with feeling.. enjoyed with luv..
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Date: 9/10/2010 4:58:00 PM
What a beautiful afternoon to sit and read poetry here at PoetrySoup. Please keep writing and sharing your poems with us. What a diverse group of poets we have here I am so happy you are one of us Paul. Have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2010 3:53:00 PM
nice one, enjoyed your write, wish you the best of your day ahead..P.D.
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