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Hidden Beauty

The starling whispers Over the rough grass where I lay A tale of warning and treachery echo from its pointed beak The branch jumps at the starling’s leave The cattails by the water are none like the cat’s tail making patterns in the ground rock in front of me. It looks up boldly I look cautiously It is beautiful but deadly, The poised paws lingering on the edge of decision The velvet limb darts forward and brings nighttime early The stars are bright and many They disappear to show a sliver of an eye hiding in the foilage The shadows bring about the death of day And still the eye is Cloaked by starlight and hidden by moonlight The branches twitch, but I must not Held to where I lay by its gaze Not by fear but by wonder A hand reaches out I recognize it as my own The gold eye disappears and l am left Just me Haunted and reaching For hidden beauty

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/25/2017 1:08:00 PM
I am amazed at your talent. This poem kept me prisoner in a way as after finishing, I kept going back and going back and each time finding something different to peak my thoughts. From the starling and it warning to the cat lying in wait. The picture is vivid and alluring, in that don't go in there but you do anyway, kind of way. And then the ending, once again the perfect closing to a fantastic adventure of the mind. Wonderfully done Iris.
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Iris Blade
Date: 4/25/2017 3:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, it means a lot. I appreciate it. I wrote this poem based on a dream I had. I tried to imagine it on paper, and I think it worked. Thanks so much!
Date: 2/12/2017 8:32:00 AM
Very well done Iris ! :)
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Date: 2/12/2017 11:47:00 AM
Thank you for the encouraging comment! I haven't posted many poems as of recently. I have been busy but I hope this one makes up for it!
Date: 2/11/2017 5:04:00 AM
"The poised paws lingering on the edge of decision...//... The velvet limb darts forward and brings nighttime early"...// What wonderful sentences in a beauty of a poem.. Hidden beauty? Not really, very open beauty!
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Iris Blade
Date: 2/12/2017 11:46:00 AM
Thank you so much! I am glad you enjoyed my poem! Comments like yours influence me to put pen to paper.

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