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Hidden Beauty

..............I could write you  ...................poetic images ...............that would make  ............other women drool. ...............Speak of sunsets  ...........wired, computerized  ....................................to  .....................................P ...................................PU ..............................PULSE ............ ...to the rhythm of .........your striking features B............Build you a ladder  .............from light, that we ..............could climb to the  ..............gates of euphoria. ..............Tell you that they  .............named it after you  E..........................Ecstasy. ............I could and I would  .........but I know you better  .......... ....than that. I know  .....................what you like. .........................I can taste  ..............it on my buds. You ....................want a man of  ......................simple words ..................spun from truth. A.........A man that will never  .........run out on you. A man  ..............that when you hold  ......................is steady and  .............rooted. I am steady  ..............and rooted but also,  ...........I am in love with you. U............Not by the waterfall .........or against the light of a  ..........full moon. Not walking  ...................along the beach ....................while the ocean ..............whispers in my ears. ............. I love you first thing  .......even on a dingy morning. ........................I love you on ...........evenings when it is so  .........cloudy there is not even  ................one star in the sky. ........It is just dark. I love you .........when we're on separate  .......couches reading different .......books. When we're alone  ...........or together in a crowd .......I love you from the other  ........side of the room. On the .......first floor when you're on  ....the twenty third. When you .....have a cold and even more  ........when you are sicker still. T.....The simple truth is you're  .........stuck with me from now  .............to eternity........why? Y.................because the best  ............part about you is that .........I know you love me too. 01~22~2015 Sponsor: Rhonda Contest: Hidden Beauty

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Date: 4/8/2015 2:08:00 PM
oooo, I love your poetry most, when you are up to something... LOL, so sweet. Hidden Beauty is the best... LINDA
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Date: 3/22/2015 1:34:00 PM
A genius at work...loved it....Seren
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Date: 2/15/2015 10:57:00 AM
Maurice, Congratulations on the win. *Skat *
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Date: 2/6/2015 10:26:00 PM
I always adored this one. BIG congrats, Armand.
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Date: 2/4/2015 11:44:00 AM
Armand I am so sorry I missed seeing this before - was posted when mum was also ill:-( A brilliant unique take on the theme and I love the form you created:-) Many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 1/28/2015 4:37:00 PM
To love like that is insurmountable, nothing will ever stand in its path......Loved it ...Seren definitely a fav
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Date: 1/24/2015 12:06:00 AM
This is really clever, Armand. Hiding the word like that within the poem and composing such a BEAUTIFUL poem just as the title of the contest denotes. This one for sure is a fave!
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Date: 1/24/2015 12:06:00 AM
I just can't believe I did not know you had posted three poems recently. It's like I spaced out or something.
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Date: 1/22/2015 2:56:00 PM
- Unique ..... love it !!!! - (7++ :) - Good luck in contest - // Anne-Lise ;)
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Date: 1/22/2015 6:26:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise!

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