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Hidden Beauty

QUIET RIVER WAKES A river lays still on a hush Of edges mild in deepened blue; Until her trail unfurls a change As if to wake from rare debut. Beneath the stars first dazzling rays Old marbles glaze on hillsides green To roll like jewels down the coast Embellishing her womb, serene. Dazed by the fluidity of This radiant bob, this duskfall thrill Mutes my whispers as seashells play; Requesting for a tide’s refill. Should I dream then, for just a while As my bare heels might softly tread; On riverdance and air-tossed quays To where this heart is blithely led. ................. Rhonda J. Saunders' Hidden Beauty Contest 1/20/2015

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Date: 2/15/2015 10:52:00 AM
Nette, Congratulations on the win. *Skat *
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Date: 2/6/2015 10:30:00 PM
this is gorgeous, Nette and a very well deserved win. Congrats to you in the contest.
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Date: 2/6/2015 1:05:00 AM
Nette, I am dazed with your expressions of hidden beauty- 'requesting for a tide's refill' and 'mutes my whispers as seashells play' to quote a few. How well you pick the essence of hidden beauty! Congrats. Mohan
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Date: 2/5/2015 7:52:00 AM
I knew this one was going to do really well Nette. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/4/2015 7:53:00 PM
Now That's a poem
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Date: 2/4/2015 11:27:00 AM
Absolutely delightful Nette:-) Many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/21/2015 2:15:00 PM
This is a hauntingly beautiful poem filled with outstanding imagery and rolling words that carry the reader along in their flow. Your poetic soul sees magic in life, absorbing its beauty and quietly dispersing this treasure to others through you words. Emile. #7
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Date: 1/21/2015 12:30:00 PM
"Whispers as seashells play: Requesting for a tide's refill." I especially like this idea, like one sitting, contemplating, on the beach watching seashells refill. Love, daver
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Date: 1/21/2015 10:35:00 AM
Embellishing her womb---I find it very sacred strongest.Wonderful nette>love
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Date: 1/21/2015 2:30:00 AM
Thank you Nette for your kind words.The poem was inspired by some words of Marianne Moore, hence my poetry now posted on youtube for folks to listen and to create a mayfly moment.Best wishes with your creative endeavours.Rgds Brian Read more at: http://www.poetrysoup.com/member_area/my_outbox.aspx
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Date: 1/21/2015 12:07:00 AM
Something weird is happening Nette ! First, I heard birds-a-chirping out my window all morning, infact, that's what woke me this morning, and then, I can't tell you the countless number of poems I read today about Spring...and it is mid January....could it be...an earlie Spring this year ! I better not get my hopes up ! *smiles* great write dear poet.....much love, james
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Date: 1/20/2015 6:14:00 PM
Truly a refreshing write to read Nette!
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Date: 1/20/2015 3:12:00 PM
Your images of a lazy river slowly waking are breathtaking. 7777777s
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Date: 1/20/2015 1:55:00 PM
Hello Nette. QUIET RIVER WAKES IS A BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF LITERATURE. It takes the GOLD
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Date: 1/20/2015 1:46:00 PM
I want to row down that river and camp beneath those stars, beside of her. You've penned a beautiful word-painting.
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Date: 1/20/2015 1:37:00 PM
Nette, you write with such ease, silver and gold slip off the tongue of your stanzas. This is such a beautiful entry. It is sure to do well. #7
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Date: 1/20/2015 1:24:00 PM
- A really beautiful poem, Nette !!! - I got a feeling of early spring by reading this :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/20/2015 1:20:00 PM
Reads like a winner for the contest about rivers and waters, etc..Very descriptive with good poetic quality..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..Sara
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