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Hidden Beauty

As I ride through the desert miles on miles of sand I see Where's the beauty in the desert ? Why it's, the camel under me Some think them ugly Of all the beast, that dwell upon the earth I see another deeper beauty based on what the camel's worth The hairy pads, on his knees let him kneel upon hot sand and His large flat feet look funny But let him stand upon soft land His eyes are big, his ears are small His nose moves on his face He has a hump high on his back and seldom walks with grace With patchy hair and long thin legs He's sure a sight to see The only beauty in the desert I'm glad He's here with me For every attribute he has is suited for the sand and God provided me with Him So I'd survive this land

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Date: 2/15/2015 7:12:00 PM
Congrats on this wonderful poem Jerry. A great write indeed....Sharon G.
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Date: 2/15/2015 10:51:00 AM
Jerry Congratulations on the win. *Skat *
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Date: 2/5/2015 7:55:00 AM
I love your entry Jerry. It is a number one for me! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/4/2015 11:44:00 PM
Congrats on your win Jerry.Love...rajat
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Date: 2/4/2015 11:33:00 AM
Great write Jerry - guess beauty really is in the eye of the beholder even with camels - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/21/2015 8:36:00 AM
You have a beautiful world of thoughts with that you have felt the beauty of the camel in the desert. You have beautiful eyes with beautiful sight. Lovely done, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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Date: 1/20/2015 11:42:00 PM
Don't get fooled by that mirage.... Great piece my friend
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Date: 1/20/2015 10:35:00 AM
Gosh, this one caught me by surprise..Ive always wanted to ride a camel, its on my bucket list. Thoroughly enjoyed. BG
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 1/20/2015 5:46:00 PM
Thank you Barbara, I hope you get your wish long before you kick it
Date: 1/20/2015 10:31:00 AM
You paint the scene with descriptive words that bring the essence of your experience into our conscious mind and we can walk in your shoes for a short time and feel what you feel. Emile.
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 1/20/2015 5:45:00 PM
Thank you Emile, that is one of the finest comments that any of my poems has ever received

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