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Hidden Anger

My contempt for anger always shows Unaware it breeds in my own veins-- How to be better, my heart follows A pathway of kindness this like follows Contest Grook, for Silent One 14 Feb 2016

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/18/2016 8:08:00 PM

very nice one, Franco. Congrats on the win

Susan Gentry

Date: 2/17/2016 9:24:00 PM

Congratulations!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/17/2016 9:56:00 AM

Franco, Congrats on your Grook win. XOX ~LINDA~

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/17/2016 8:54:00 AM

hello franco... good message.. did you mean " this LIFE follows?".. sweet congrats and huggs

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/16/2016 9:16:00 PM

Hello Franco. Thanks for your participation in this contest! For me, the first two lines start off good, but then when I reach the third and fourth lines I get slightly confused. What do you mean by "this like follows" at the end? It's an interesting idea to be angry at anger, but I get a bit lost in the middle. Hope this helps. Keep writing, my friend.