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Hidden Dead hands pressed numb cold against glass without a view Nowhere to run mind on fire no answers to the questions Buried deep within… bring the shovel if it will help, not this time these answers are too far hidden. Time won’t tell time does not heal scars that show no profit. Let me out desperately banging on walls that were built by someone that person was NOT me. By : Debbie Mills Kelly ( Debbie Philly) 3/24/2014

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/17/2014 6:44:00 PM

Deep and dark, very nice write!

Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 4/24/2014 4:54:00 PM

Thank you so much Arthur :)

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 3/25/2014 12:09:00 PM

So many powerful emotions here.... Deep, expressive, nice work: :-)

Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 3/27/2014 1:57:00 PM

Thank you so much Keith and nice to meet you !! :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 3/25/2014 12:00:00 AM

Mmm...dark & visceral. Let not poignant breaths win this day. This was deeply intense.

Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 3/25/2014 11:55:00 AM

Thank you so much Gabe :) Great to see you here and congrats i saw that you were on the top poets list:)

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/24/2014 1:00:00 AM

I had a similar nightmare to yours after I ate a slice of pizza just before going to bed. Welcome back. I haven't seen you here recently.

Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 3/24/2014 1:12:00 AM

Awww Thank you Robert... I have been sick... just got out of the hospital.... thought I had a TIA.... but still not well yet.... and a bit depressed.... but thank you so much for reading and for welcoming me back :) Its good to see you ss well !!