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Into halves Knife cuts pumpkin Damp flames

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Vladislav Raven
Date: 11/25/2018 10:36:00 AM
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Hi Ibohal, I love cooking, I have never been near a pumpkin. I love the image that the words within your simple write do convey. Once I start thinking about food all other thoughts go out of my head, I can't see metaphor, just food. I think I am off to the kitchen once more. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend....Mike.
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Ibohal Kshetrimayum
Date: 11/26/2018 12:38:00 AM
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Trout cooked with pomegranate, with a pinch of cilantro, try it you'll feel the muse moaning. Happy food and good poetry my friend.

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