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Hibiscus

Hi, gentle flower. Good morning to you, waking from your dreamy slumber. Like rays of sun light, your golden petals reach forth to greet the new day. Glistening in the morning haze with drops of honey kissed dew, you beckon forth those that would take from you your life renewing nectar, leaving for you the crystalline promise of renewal from the fertile dust that brings forth the promise of new life. Gently your limbs bow to the breeze that warms your leaves as the light shines brightly moving from this side to that, and the shadows grow long as the day hurries on and the specter of dreams awaits your inevitable slumber. Twilight ascends in rapid demeanor inviting your satin wings to enfold you with whispered silence as you are drawn into deepening sleep. The day is done and the time has come as darkness sings the final dirge that sees you to your everlasting rest, never more to cast your Venusian beauty upon the eyes of the world.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/20/2015 3:19:00 AM
I enjoyed this very much. Julia, with best wishes.
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James Inman
Date: 9/20/2015 8:31:00 AM
Thank you Julia, its nice when someone visits one of my earlier ones.
Date: 8/8/2015 2:35:00 PM
I really enjoyed this wonderful poem, James. The imagery your words have painted here is so vivid! Very nicely penned!
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James Inman
Date: 8/11/2015 8:04:00 AM
Sorry for taking soooo long to respond to your comment. I was reading your "March" poem (lovely) and remembered this. Thank you for the nice comment.
Date: 8/7/2015 1:59:00 PM
James, absolutely beautiful in every way 7++++ and thanks for visiting my puppy poem, yes those cute little puppies do tend to grow and quite quickly to!!!
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James Inman
Date: 8/7/2015 3:16:00 PM
BW, Hi, thank you, you are tooo kind. Just visited your End Line, "Fathomless Tangled Poem"-again. It is a very special poem.
Date: 8/7/2015 10:04:00 AM
Very nice!
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James Inman
Date: 8/7/2015 12:09:00 PM
Thank you Julia. Thanks for the visit.
Date: 8/5/2015 4:25:00 PM
I do enjoy my Hibiscus in the summer..The flowers are so lovely but they don't last very long..Good work..Thanks for the visit to my p age..Sara
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James Inman
Date: 8/5/2015 4:51:00 PM
Thanks Sara, I'm a huge fan of flowers.
Date: 8/5/2015 2:43:00 PM
i like the shape and imagery of this delightful piece, james... fascinated!.. hugggs
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James Inman
Date: 8/6/2015 11:02:00 AM
Nette, it seems my reply to you yesterday got lost in the cloud. My second attempt. Thank you so much for your lovely comment.
Date: 8/5/2015 1:59:00 PM
The poem is as stunning as the flower - a truly beautiful write James! Hugs jan xx7
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James Inman
Date: 8/5/2015 4:49:00 PM
What a wonderful comment. Thank you.

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