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Hi I know that you don't know me But I pass this way each day I'm not so much to look at At least that's what they say But if you would, take time to see And just give me a chance I'll show there's much more to me Then seen at you've first glance I heard I look much younger In a softer evening light and quite a little thinner when I wear a pair of tights My hair gets really fluffy When I get it blown and dried Perhaps a little sexy, too When there's makeup 'round my eyes But the better part of me Is something you must find Deep beneath my skin In this love filled heart of mine This piece was inspired by a poem written by Robert Andrew Lyle , named "Overwhelmed", and the comments that pursued.

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Date: 3/24/2014 5:10:00 PM
I love this. Looks like you wrote from a feminine point of view and that surprised me. Nice seeing a new poet here! well,new for ME anyway.
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