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Hey You Most importantly. Happy Mothers Day to all of you mothers!! And to the fathers that for one reason or another try to fill that place in someones life. I also want to say I'm sorry. I'm sorry for the times when I'm late in responding and I know there's been times with good intentions to come back and respond later. And it never happened. I'm sorry if ever there was a time it crossed your mind that I think too highly of myself because in truth you will likely never be more wrong in your life. Often times my struggle is a silent one and it centers around my own self worth. And honestly sometimes I feel completely unworthy of the comments and the praise for my poetry. And yet. Like many of you I recall every mile I ran, walked or crawled to get through hell to be who, and what I am today. Still. I've a ways to go. But you are helping me get to a better place. Each time you take the time to comment or reply another thread of an unbreakable bond is put in place. And I know the same is true of me. I promise to try to do better and please never doubt what you have come to mean to me in a short period of time. Lastly I was asked if Edwin C Hofert is a pen name or if it's my real name. It is my real name. And the best part of me is what I found here at poetrysoup.com. You.

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Date: 5/11/2015 8:12:00 AM
Sweet expressions from wonderful lines which are so liberal to disallow the message stay hidden. I love this poem and it is definitely a 7
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Date: 5/10/2015 10:59:00 AM
Such an open honest narrative Edwin - I for one am so so glad you are here and it is a joy to read your poems - I can say in all honesty I do not know where I would be emotionally if I hadn't started writing - may your pen always flow with your wonderful words:-) Hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/10/2015 11:46:00 AM
aww that is the most beautiful song Edwin. I am just so pleased you are here and writing - if anything can boost our flagging spirits it is writing and getting a response from someone else who may be feeling just the same as you are:-) It is such a wonderful support network I do not know how I would have coped with my life if i hadn't discovered I could pen the odd poem or two:-) Hugs jan xx
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/10/2015 11:43:00 AM
You are the wind beneath my wings :) Happy Mothers day Jan :)

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