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Hey, Love, Come Find Me

Love, oh love we hear it all the time what is it with this bitty word that makes us want to rhyme it makes you light it makes you frothy it makes your eyes gleam bright it wisks us away up off our feet when we find such delight but how i say can it be obtained must we look and seek it could be there in just a stare why don't you take a peek do sparks fly will it make you high this question i need answered is it blind? really blind? as if a word could see for the wives tales answer quick and true love is on the rise but only if your patient "DO NOT look and you will find?" don't look, dont look thats what you say to me yep correct hey thats right hey love, you come find me and there he came charmed my world and since no days apart one summer night and the winds were right he put blinders on my heart my, the years do flee it started in highschool and still carries on a sweetheart legacy trust me here you'll get your turn i tell you its prancing in your heart will churn a dream come true and still you wonder when Unlock your chains sit back and wait like butter time will melt What your heart yearns will bring years to pass once you feel what i've felt

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/19/2011 1:33:00 AM
Butterfly, Congratulations on your wonderful poem being featured this week. I'm thrilled to be back here on the soup. Now I have time to check on all of the featured poems of the week. Plus more.. Have yourself a great one,.. always ~p.d.
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Date: 8/15/2011 9:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Miranda. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/28/2011 3:23:00 PM
Loved it! So...on target, y'know? And I love the title.
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Date: 2/18/2011 11:58:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Miranda. I am sorry for being late to welcome you to the site. I hope to be back and at full speed in the next week or so. Until then please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/16/2011 6:30:00 PM
Nice expressions so well worded on love, Miranda
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Date: 2/16/2011 5:35:00 PM
I especially liked about the sixth stanza that starts "and there he came"..Enjoyed reading tonight..Those charmers sometimes are good and sometimes are bad..Sara
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Date: 2/16/2011 5:21:00 PM
i really like your poem:) hope to read more!! k. croft
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