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Hey - Keep Me In the Loop

Hey! Keep Me in the Loop!
Hey! Dawn's gift is a blessing no man yet has owned But my friend seems 'eternity' since you last phoned! Please don't rest on your laurels, although they're quite real In the world, from God's viewpoint, and love that I feel. Hey! Though we look like heirlooms (our luck or God's Grace?) And the routes of our sojourns now map lost young face. 'Life' is art carved by time and each sculpture's unique, Though our children may feel that aged beauty's more cheek! Hey! A loop is a circle that can't know its end And as close to perfection as we get my friend. Though my poem seems cluttered with words that don't fit, May you still grok you're loved! That's my truth! Take the hit! Hey! If minds are like islands found oceaned by fear, And time's waves carve its beaches, old friend, it is clear That I'll love you as long as 'dots' still tempt a 'line' To connect them. So, pick up a phone, Valentine! Long Tooth August 2nd of 2019

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