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He's the One

A cold, hard heart broken many times used and abused battered and broken Her stolen innocence greedy prying hands taking it away what a rotten liar! "Just the wrong guy" she told herself just the wrong guy will love find her? She deserves more someone who cares someone who loves A caring soul! A loving guy she meets calm, sweet, caring no greed, no selfishness "He's the one! Yes, He's the one! Now love has finally found her!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/8/2010 12:17:00 PM
i like this poem very much, and i can relate to it too...i also know ppl who were in those kinds of situations...lovely write...God Bless and keep up the good work...-Brittany-
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Date: 3/2/2010 11:01:00 AM
I understand this poem!!! This Poem Is AMAZING!!!^.^
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Date: 2/25/2010 9:26:00 AM
great write, amazing, i find myself in this position a lot. lots of love, johneta
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Date: 2/22/2010 11:21:00 AM
very true about love. when you find that other person their is no need for greed and selfish deeds thia poem is very sweeet
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Date: 2/22/2010 10:46:00 AM
Awww sweet ;)
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Date: 2/19/2010 10:44:00 AM
lovely poem it was very nice flowing along with the power of the words good writtin keep it up
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Date: 2/19/2010 10:37:00 AM
oieee, i love this chicka. it touches a soft spot in me <3
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Date: 2/18/2010 11:43:00 AM
aww this is a good one too i love that it tells a little story and that story has a happy ending that we can all hope for ourselves. this was very well written to i could tell it was done with skill and care! =)Jo
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Date: 2/18/2010 11:07:00 AM
Very nice. I just broke up with someone who I thought was the right guy but he ended up being just like the rest of them. Im glad you found the right one for you. Good Luck!!! -Courtney-
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