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Hero

The Lone Ranger came to visit me last night. He was perfect, his shiny six-guns hanging on his hip, and the mask (to protect his real identity!) "Howdy!" I said; "Hiya, pardner!" he replied, and I motioned for him to take a seat. "No thanks," he groaned, "I think I'll stand, been in the saddle now for going on three days!" There were so many questions on my mind. How come he always got the bad guy, and rode off into the sunset with a flourish and a smile, and how come you never saw the blood? "Things were less complicated then," he mused, not like now where everything's so realistic, so there's nothing left for people to imagine;" then he disappeared without a trace... He's still my hero. These days everyone's part good part bad, so that the line is hard to find. It was easier when men wore white and rode high up in the saddle. The good guy always grabbed the glory, then disappeared in a cloud of dust with a hearty "Hi Ho Silver, away!!"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/11/2012 3:38:00 AM
I like this ;}
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Date: 7/9/2012 2:35:00 PM
Interesting one..Different kind of theme..Enjoyed reading your story in poetic form..I always like The Lone Ranger also..I wonder why they don't bring back reruns of it..Sara
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Date: 7/9/2012 4:49:00 AM
:)) I enjoyed it, Keith. Awesome. Love those heroes. I wonder why lol. Love, Toquyen
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Date: 7/9/2012 12:11:00 AM
Hiya Keith,..I'm with Owen's comment....go A Team and all the other positive role models out there. You chose a great one to write about and what a nice narration too...I still remember the Tonto and Lone Ranger dolls my dad got me for Christmas one year...I was mad when my older sister turned them both into bad guys! hahah...enjoyed! gwendolen
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Date: 7/8/2012 8:27:00 PM
HA....i love this...PD
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Date: 7/8/2012 2:20:00 PM
ah yes, the good old innocent days of youth! i can clearly hear the music that accompanied that "hi ho silver" and the way it made me feel. you've captured a slice of childhood very succinctly here, keith, and i love the poem!
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Date: 7/8/2012 11:55:00 AM
Did you forget Tonto and Scout? love it.
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