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Hero

Double Tanka A man of prestige a night in shining armor with one arm he lifts.... his gallant attire brushed pure- heart aflutter, she submits.... With pink skies distant upon the mighty horse, one.... into the sunset a beauty and her hero, together, endless her dreams.... _________ This is a story of how my brother in-law proposed to my sister(upon horseback)she was elated. Her hero for life, and also mine for protecting my sis and loving her through eternity. _________ Contest

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Date: 1/27/2011 9:19:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in Crystal's contest "My Hero" ^Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/18/2011 2:59:00 PM
I remember this one so well, Rick. A greater love story has never been told. Congratulations on your success in Crystal's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/18/2011 2:14:00 PM
Way to go Rick's brother in-law. Indeed a knight in shining armour. I hope you show him this wonderful poem. Many congratulations to you, and to him....:)
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Date: 1/18/2011 12:03:00 PM
Congrats Rick on your HM in the My Hero contest with this astounding write and win.. for your entry.. enjoy your special honor with luv.. my friend...
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Date: 1/2/2011 7:40:00 PM
Hey Rick, Thanks for the comments! I appreciate them. Happy New Year! Jimmy
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Date: 1/1/2011 10:27:00 AM
What a creative and romantic way to propose! This charming prince would be any woman's hero. Best wishes in the contest with this outstanding double tanka, Rick! Happy New Year, Carolyn
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Date: 1/1/2011 12:50:00 AM
Ahhh, how wonderful. I wish I could think of a beautiful hero story for this contest!
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Date: 12/31/2010 6:13:00 PM
Very nice memory and nice to hear how this does happen. Have a good New year.
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Date: 12/31/2010 5:38:00 PM
Nice remebrance and sweet memory you cherish for your brother-in-law and sister, Rick. Happy New year. My wishes for all the best to your sister and your hero
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