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Here's One For the Older Soupers

Last week my foot was hurting The next day was my neck after that my shoulder I've sure become a wreck Currently my knee hurt but I know it won't for long It's sure to be forgotten as a new pain comes along

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/14/2018 1:30:00 AM

G'day Jerry … this is why senior citizen club meetings should be held in a chemist shop with a chemist on standby - thanks Mate - Lindsay

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/22/2015 1:47:00 PM

you are young at heart, jerry... fascinating work about our council of elders!... you charm.. huggs

Jerry T Curtis
Date: 1/22/2015 3:58:00 PM

Thank You Nette huggs back at you

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/22/2015 9:19:00 AM

Enjoyed the humor, Jerry. For a moment It's me, 80 years old

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/22/2015 8:11:00 AM

Good structure with a natural cadence that welcomes the reader and enlist further exploration. Life can be depressing at times and it seems that you have had more than your rightful share of misfortune, may the future be more promising. Emile.