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Here and Now

In a drop of water a universe. In a peony poetic verse. In a child’s face sweet purity. In just one moment eternity…

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Heidi Sands

Date: 1/22/2019 9:36:00 PM

Excellent. Well done :)

Susan Jeavons
Date: 1/22/2019 10:17:00 PM

Thank you again Heidi. Will check out some of your work tomorrow. Good night, Susan

Michael Wise

Date: 1/20/2019 2:36:00 PM

In a word......WOW! So few words have achieved such depth here. Incredible. :)

Susan Jeavons
Date: 1/21/2019 4:35:00 PM

Thank you so much Michael! Sorry it took so long to get back to you all. I just came home from the hospital today. I;ll try to read as many poems as I can. Thanks again. Blessing!

Caycay Jennings

Date: 1/20/2019 12:17:00 PM

Applause! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Susan Jeavons
Date: 1/21/2019 4:36:00 PM

Thank you. Thank You. (I am taking a bow.) Poetry Hugs back CayCay. Susan

Okonkwo Ifeanyichukwu

Date: 1/18/2019 10:30:00 PM

I just on moment good work Susan.

Susan Jeavons
Date: 5/11/2019 12:03:00 PM

Sorry I missed this Okonkwo. Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem. Blessings, Susan

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/18/2019 9:53:00 PM

sweet purity has never been described more succinctly, Susan.

Susan Jeavons
Date: 1/21/2019 4:41:00 PM

Thank you Caren. I will try to read more of your work too. Blessings, Susan

Valerie Staton

Date: 1/18/2019 8:45:00 PM

So much stated in so few words. Love it!

Susan Jeavons
Date: 1/21/2019 4:39:00 PM

Thank you Valerie. Blessings. Susan