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Her Wonderful Mother Nature

HER WONDERFUL MOTHER NATURE Once upon her entering and exiting Her comings and goings Groceries, gym or mall Mother Nature made the mirrors love her All-knowing reflection, No adjustments needed... Please...not one correction Causing confusion, she's unflawed Everywhere, in every room, claiming, stealing all attention Gorgeous green eyed-snake women start hissing, Salivating, half-dog half-men, jaws stuck, stalled Remember her...Oh, don't they all? She and I, sometimes engage in A carefully unscripted conversation And so from mine own imagination...I will share She leaves the world, with rare...souvenirs Letting us know she was near A trace of her intimidating yet inviting, invisible scent Where her valuable diamond time was spent But none free to spare A lost, left behind, strand of hair A walking razor Her shadow click-clacks in, Legs, classily crossed ladylike, saddled that lucky chair Sipped only a pair of cocktails, Her figure a musical note, a cursive signature, Her FORM flows, dips smooth and full Stunning, so easily capturing us all Her smile, does accurately spell The wonderful definition of the word Beautiful... Look her up in the dictionary my friend For she is a non-fictional woman Strong-her world has gravitational pull you apart Aquarius without a speck of ugliness In February she effortlessly Valentines a fool's heart Can never look messily That is quite improbably, an impossibility Surreally painted together perfectly Like a Dali nude canvass on art, Breathing...responding...moving Wonderful Mother Nature, knew exactly what she was doing Marvelously done, on her part.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/17/2016 9:12:00 AM
Great imagery, I like it. Welcome to PoetrySoup, I'm new here too, lots of great writers to visit and read -DC
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Gregory Abella
Date: 8/17/2016 1:12:00 PM
Thank you DC.... This seems like a great place for writers to be.
Date: 8/11/2016 6:13:00 PM
Gregory Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Gregory Abella
Date: 8/11/2016 6:17:00 PM
Thank you Poet Destroyer A. I look forward to sharing my pieces....
Date: 8/11/2016 6:00:00 PM
Thank you for sharing, Gregory. Skat
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Gregory Abella
Date: 8/11/2016 6:17:00 PM
Thank you Skat....I feel welcomed already

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