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Her Whisper

. I heard her whisper “james” “james” And my eyes closed as my head in slow motion pressed 'gainst the down

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C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 1/29/2011 2:13:00 AM

James,James. .simply beautiful!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/25/2011 10:34:00 AM

my, my , my-- who is a-whispering?? pray tell, pray tell!!! very intriguing, James :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2011 4:39:00 PM

ok, now this is the clearest one of yours EVER. hahaha. LUv, Andrea

Daver Austin

Date: 1/20/2011 7:55:00 AM

Ooooowwww, this one is open to interpertation. That's what makes it so good. Love, Dave

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 1/19/2011 10:22:00 AM

Hello James, This is just so lovely, it touches me Thank you James for visiting me and sharing your kind words As Always, Shar

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/18/2011 4:15:00 AM

Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry James. It was a pleasure to read your amazing poetry today and I hope you will continue to write. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be in 2011. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/17/2011 5:12:00 PM

Sensuous and simply magnificent James.. when u hear that call u must obey and write these beautiful words down to share.. thankxx my friend.. another level luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/17/2011 2:39:00 PM

Great passionate work in so few words...If for a contest, good luck..Your presence at my work was like a ray of sunshine on this cloudy day in Georgia...Sara

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/17/2011 2:27:00 PM

Lovely poem James:))

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/17/2011 2:17:00 PM

Sounds like a nice way to wake up or dream James... thanks for always stopping by for a comment... Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/17/2011 1:59:00 PM

Was it a dream or a nightmare or nostalgia, James and there are many James on the Soup,

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/17/2011 12:05:00 PM

awesome, James! a sweet little lyric with your name.. nice motion with a hint of sorrow.. enjoyed your poem,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/17/2011 12:01:00 PM

Sometimes we awaken during the most wonderful dreams. As you did here, I try to fall asleep again hoping to return to these dreams. Exquisite poem, James! I think many people will be able to relate to the feelings expressed here. Love you, Carolyn