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Her True Colors

. On the canvas laid out flat her length she did twist coil and spiral Yes she did meander uncovered On the wet chosen oils

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/2/2011 6:28:00 AM

While stopping by to read some of your amazing poetry I would like to thank you for your comments on my poetry. Your words are always appreciated James. May the sun always shine down upon you and fill your soul with inspiration. Love, Carol

Stephen Parker

Date: 4/4/2011 6:31:00 PM

Interesting that you seem to twine natural beauty and applied beauty (chosen oils). A natural beauty is laid bare, and enhanced with the chosen instruments.

Mc Mc

Date: 11/24/2010 4:16:00 AM

One of a kind here! You're very good at these--tanks James- mcmc

Charles Henderson

Date: 11/5/2010 10:58:00 PM

James, you't think she would prefer latex. Very original. Charles

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/3/2010 9:58:00 PM

This little verse exudes much sensuality, James...exquisite write..totally. Love, Audrey

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/3/2010 7:04:00 AM

You give new meaning to "body painting" in this sensual poem, James. I would have loved to see the "canvas" when she was finished. Very original and quite a provocative image, my friend! Love, Carolyn

Shirin Neshat

Date: 11/2/2010 6:06:00 PM

good imegry

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/29/2010 6:42:00 AM

I love the imagery you paint with your words James, you got to send me a pic of the finished product ;) Soupmail from CT(",)

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 10/28/2010 10:54:00 AM

Wow, I love where this takes me. Thank you James, and also for your comment on my latest... As Always, Shar

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 10/28/2010 12:40:00 AM

Wonderfully brushed James!Celene!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/27/2010 4:28:00 PM

Interesting and powerful, sensual portrayal here. Very nice. Thank you for sharing. I hope to be reading more of you in the next few months. Thank you for your continued support of my work, too. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Daver Austin

Date: 10/27/2010 9:46:00 AM

This sounds like a Jackson Pollack painting. I guess, though, he had other techniques. This poem is SO open to exotic interpretation. You be de cool daddy. LOve, Dave