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Her Ten Minutes

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Her Ten Minutes

Her ten minutes sneak
Through the hole of an iron needle
In the hand of a cobbler,
Who sits like a spider
At a nook of the city.

She is broken on her shoes ;
‘Wait’, his word stumbles over rum stink.
Passers by give her tribute
With their glances ; and the beauty
Blushes under the hot sun.

She stoops her proud head ,
Which sways intermittently
Towards the east and the west ,
To check if some acquaintance
Is dropping a belittling eye.

For Miss Seena is rich and noble ,
But with a little money.


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  1. Date: 12/28/2011 6:29:00 PM
    Looking at this one again. I sure like it! and I see it won in a contest. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 9/21/2011 12:45:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win Fabiyas. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/19/2011 9:20:00 PM
    very interesting take on this contest, Fabiyas. Poems about people are so interesting. Congratulations to you

  1. Date: 9/18/2011 10:35:00 PM
    Great lines FABIYAS... a pleasure to read.. a lovely piece..smiles

  1. Date: 9/17/2011 3:41:00 AM
    Congratulations on your accomplished place in the contest "unmentionables"...CR

  1. Date: 9/17/2011 12:00:00 AM
    CONGRATS FABIYAS my friend on your HM in the contest with this fantastic entry luv.. super honor for u..

  1. Date: 9/9/2011 12:50:00 PM
    Fabiyas,i enjoyed Ten minutes. Is miss seena your neighbour?

  1. Date: 9/8/2011 12:11:00 AM
    The first stanza really captures us with its imagery, Fabiyas. Very interesting: ten minutes sneaked through the hole of iron needle!!

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 7:22:00 AM
    I like, 'like a spider at a nook...' You capture her unease deftly.

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 3:10:00 AM
    Very nice Fabiyas.I liked it.

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 2:15:00 AM
    nice to see you around again, fab... this is a daring write with a delicious, sneaky approach to it.. smashing! :) huggs, nette