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Her Swift Chariot I Await

From a swift wind may she return this night, may the moon delight the path less traveled and make mighty her heals; for this tiny flower wan in her meadow, where lightning rips the skeletal gloom, (where she knows not which way to heaven) --- but the Star which shines above forgotten tombs.... How I miss her warmth.... while the night pours melancholy and the sky thunders forbidden secrets..... For many a moon shall pass til I have her home; where it is now all but empty..... and the clock ticks not for time, but a cruel, long wait, and ill tidings grin.... Have me faith while the devil licks his lips, and throws sharp stones, from a desolate deep dark; She is mighty with me and I with She, no death could give us part --- no gate from hell to keep us apart; with the strong arms of the Lord, (her swift chariot I await) *** A prayer and a plea that my girlfriend has a swift recovery in the hospital***

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Date: 4/25/2017 10:22:00 AM
What a passionate prayer for your loved one. It is such a heartfelt write and I too pray for her speedy recovery.
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 4/27/2017 10:29:00 PM
Thanks Messoh, all is well now, but your prayers are well appreciated along with all the other great poets who have sent their prayers:-) God bless you all!
Date: 3/4/2017 7:03:00 AM
I send prayers yours and her way. So sorry the two of you are going through this difficult time. You do well to place your faith in the Lord. A most moving and vivid depiction of your emotions filled with incredible imagery.
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 3/4/2017 4:19:00 PM
Thanks Richard, I appreciate your support. I always put my faith in the Lord, and could not have come this far without Him. She is doing much better now, and many honors for your kind compliments:-)
Date: 3/2/2017 8:22:00 PM
I hope you read this to her! I am sure she will love this! So beautiful!
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 3/4/2017 4:15:00 PM
Thanks Arthur, I did, she cried:-)God bless
Date: 3/2/2017 10:09:00 AM
I hope She is doing better keith..What a beauty your love for her inspired.
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 3/2/2017 4:23:00 PM
Thanks Charmaine appreciate your support and your visit:-)
Date: 2/28/2017 7:30:00 AM
This is very heartfelt, Keith. May it not be long before she returns home fully recovered. Regards // paul
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 2/28/2017 3:11:00 PM
Many thanks Paul, your wishes are most welcome:-)
Date: 2/27/2017 2:36:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, Keith - Hope all is well with her, and that she is home again - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 2/27/2017 3:07:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, appreciate the support; and it seems everyone's prayers are working, she's gotten better:-)
Date: 2/27/2017 12:14:00 PM
My prayers are for her healing and your quick relief from this heavy burden my friend. Sorry that I have been so lost, preoccupied as late. Your exceptional poetry always awes me!!! A7 AND A FAV.....
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 2/27/2017 3:03:00 PM
Thanks Robert, thankfully she's gotten better and things much more the hopeful. God bless
Date: 2/27/2017 8:14:00 AM
A great write, Keith:) my prayers are with you, may she get well soon!
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 2/27/2017 10:26:00 AM
Thanks Jo, and so kind of you to include us in your prayers:-)
Date: 2/26/2017 2:35:00 PM
i am with you on this one, keith.. such a gracious work filled with ardor... i send you my prayers and pure chi ( energy).. huggs
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 2/26/2017 3:03:00 PM
You are most kind nette, chi is very welcomed and thanks for the compliments:-)
Date: 2/26/2017 2:01:00 PM
Dear Keith please have faith that every prayer is heard and answered. I will join you in prayer and send reiki for her swift recovery. A beautiful prayer you have created in her honor. God bless, Connie
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 2/26/2017 3:00:00 PM
Bless you Connie, everyone's prayers are very welcomed, thanks for your visit. God bless
Date: 2/26/2017 11:07:00 AM
Your words are delicate, yet so strong and layered with emotion. Your feelings surface and carry the emotional force behind your words. This poem flows well and carries a message aimed at the heart. Emile.
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 2/26/2017 11:12:00 AM
Thanks for your kind visit Emile, God bless
Date: 2/26/2017 10:58:00 AM
My prayers are on the way for her Keith
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 2/26/2017 11:04:00 AM
Thanks Tim, I deeply appreciate it and thanks for taking the time to say so:-)

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