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Her Square of Fear

A hypnotist softly speaks. Heavy eyes lids, Butterflies behind her eyes, Slow heart beats, Soft breaths, Memories… She was in a Riot. It seemed to be intense. A Revolution has started, And everything was a mess. In The streets of Egypt, The Smell of tear gas Was suffocating, Tears were shed, Eyes were blurred. She found herself at last In Tahrir square, Full of anger, Full of fear, And death was everywhere. She now remembers why She has been afraid to leave the house For more than a whole month. She has been afraid to watch the news, Or even the political shows. She remembered how many people lost their eyes, And how loud she heard their cries. She suddenly screamed, and was wide awake. A hypnotist A silent room Reality… Submitted to (Picking up the Broken Pieces) Contest 27/10/2012

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Date: 12/21/2012 10:29:00 PM
Omneya Kamal , stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD
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Date: 11/8/2012 3:44:00 PM
Nice to see a new free verse writer. I was in Egypt in Cairo 2 weeks before the revolution, foolish old woman me..I did enjoy the trip and the people I met when I was alone without the group. Do stay safe! Light & Love {I have a group of poems from the trip if you'd like to read them]
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Date: 11/4/2012 5:27:00 AM
Super wow! This is an excellent write and entry you've chosen for the theme my dear friend, Omneya. I greatly enjoy reading it. Thank you for your precious time reading my latest poem. I love that poem, Road not Taken. All the best always! love/hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 11/1/2012 1:19:00 AM
I love the depths in your writing Omneya! You Pen the words and I'm transported to an alternate universe. I love how you've used the hypnotist to ensure the woman relates her tale and leaves it behind her when she's back from the brink - hence starting the healing process. Very well done!
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Vicky Tsiluma
Date: 11/1/2012 1:31:00 AM
Soul poetess? My heart is smiling.
Date: 10/29/2012 3:29:00 AM
Great write!
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Date: 10/28/2012 1:20:00 PM
This is a great write, Omneya your gift shines thru the madness. Regards, Carl
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Omneya Kamal
Date: 10/28/2012 1:46:00 PM
Hey Carl, Thanks for your lovely comment, so glad you like the poem...Have a nice week dear poet, Omneya
Date: 10/28/2012 12:54:00 PM
I just wanted to take a moment to say " Hello" I applaud you for deft with imagery.
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Omneya Kamal
Date: 10/28/2012 1:42:00 PM
Hey Jamal, Thanks a lot for checking this out :) so glad you like it, have a good week, Omneya
Date: 10/28/2012 8:36:00 AM
A really good imagery and entry for the contest, Omneya.
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Omneya Kamal
Date: 10/28/2012 1:34:00 PM
Thanksss Dinda for reading and commenting, so glad you like the poem! Love, Omneya
Date: 10/28/2012 7:02:00 AM
Great work that is very emotive and expressive ...Reads like winning material to me..Sara
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Omneya Kamal
Date: 10/28/2012 1:32:00 PM
Hey Sarah, Thanks for your encouraging words! This is the first competition I enter here, am just testing the waters :) Have a great week, Love..Omneya
Date: 10/27/2012 9:25:00 PM
Omneya, wow.... enjoyed your poem* Goodnight! Always~ PD
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Omneya Kamal
Date: 10/28/2012 1:27:00 PM
Heyyy, thank you for stopping by and so glad you enjoyed my poem! :) Have a great week, Love, Omneya
Date: 10/27/2012 3:09:00 PM
Wow! you have skills. Really enjoyed this piece found myself delivered to a place far removed from my existance. Well done
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Omneya Kamal
Date: 10/28/2012 8:08:00 AM
Richard, Thanks for reading the poem and giving me your encouraging comment! :) have a great week, Love, Omneya
Date: 10/27/2012 2:54:00 PM
A serious topic Omneya, but very well written. Wish you luck in the contest, both thumbs up for you my friend. :) Have a wonderful weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise :)
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Omneya Kamal
Date: 10/28/2012 8:07:00 AM
Thankssss Anna for always stopping by and giving me your opinion, really means alot to me,have a great week! Love, Omneya
Date: 10/27/2012 2:12:00 PM
Ahhh you tell a great story in poetic style. Very very good!! Hugs Michael
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Omneya Kamal
Date: 10/28/2012 8:05:00 AM
Thanks Micheal, so happy u like the story in this poem...Thanks for stopping by, Love, Omneya

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