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Her Songsthe Modern Cinquain Game

2,4,6,8,2 wind songs, branches dancing to an epoch ballad Such an inspiring event. Her songs. This, my submission into the "Modern Cinquain" game... Thank you James Goff for your invitation... Jared Pickett 9/12/09 Asavvy1

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Brian Strand

Date: 9/29/2009 4:29:00 AM

Jared thanks for your welcome comments.Rgds Brian

Moonbee Canady

Date: 9/21/2009 8:02:00 PM

2,4,6,8, (to)... Wind Songs... Lovely and Clever, Jared... Nothing like the sound of Earth Breathing... MoonBee

Date: 9/18/2009 7:52:00 PM

Wonderful uplifting view in this poem. Good use of imagery. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Karen

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/18/2009 5:18:00 PM

love this ballad,like an orchestra by Mozart..branched dancing in the wind--Excellent-Charma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/13/2009 4:08:00 AM

Nicely done. I can see the scene. Keep writing. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/12/2009 7:34:00 PM

Great cinquain, Jared. Love the sounds and movements you describe in the wind songs! Love, Carolyn

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/12/2009 11:16:00 AM

love the sound in this fine cinquain! Jared!...jim

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/11/2009 10:19:00 PM

Excellent, you have a way with words. I retured your mail...Raul

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/11/2009 10:01:00 PM

Excellent work Jared, love how you implemented the element of music. I left you some mail...Raul