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Her Smile

me sit here drinking on me pint i see the lovely face across from me oh how i love her lovely smile but now she has withered away nothing but her bare bones exposed but i love seeing her smile at me he hair is long with out colour barley staying on her head the dress i bought for me bride she still wears today it may be old and full of holes but she smiles at me today our love will never wither like she had done her eyes are on longer blue just two empty holes in her head her lips i can no longer kiss but she still smiles at me gaping hole in her chest but she smiles at me so i drink me pint to me love that sits across from me to the day me die i will be with her as she smiles at me

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Date: 2/18/2016 1:22:00 PM
Micheal, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/6/2015 1:34:00 PM
Micheal, Enjoyed reading your poem today. LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 10/24/2009 5:03:00 PM
Nicely done. Love is strong.
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Date: 10/22/2009 1:50:00 PM
Beautiful... deep and meaningful poem. Loved it. All the best.
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Date: 10/19/2009 5:49:00 PM
be gosh and be gorey micheal me lad, i'll be thankin' ya fer the shot and yer fine wordin' a yer prose. by the by i'll might be sharin' a pint with ya at the pub mayhaps! thankin' ya once agin'. Godspeed to ya now.
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Date: 10/19/2009 1:02:00 PM
Welcome to our soup family. I wish you success in all your writing endeavours.keep writing
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Date: 10/19/2009 3:24:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Micheal. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/18/2009 5:44:00 PM
Nice work! I look forward to reading your future posts
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Date: 10/18/2009 4:35:00 PM
true love never dies... excellent poem.
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Date: 10/18/2009 3:12:00 PM
Not sure which way to go with this one. Ghost and goblin story? Love one died? Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/18/2009 3:08:00 PM
great poem, thanks for your comment on my poem. :) keep going! you have the potential!------Ell
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Date: 10/18/2009 3:04:00 PM
Ahhhh, That's so sad and sweet. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks!
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