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Her smile

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Her smile

me sit here drinking on me pint
i see the lovely face across from me
oh how i love her lovely smile
but now she has withered away
nothing but her bare bones exposed
but i love seeing her smile at me
he hair is long with out colour
barley staying on her head
the dress i bought for me bride
she still wears today
it may be old and full of holes
but she smiles at me today
our love will never wither
like she had done 
her eyes are on longer blue
just two empty holes in her head
her lips i can no longer kiss
but she still smiles at me
gaping hole in her chest
but she smiles at me
so i drink me pint to me love
that sits across from me
to the day me die 
i will be with her
as she smiles at me

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  1. Date: 10/24/2009 5:03:00 PM
    Nicely done. Love is strong.

  1. Date: 10/22/2009 1:50:00 PM
    Beautiful... deep and meaningful poem. Loved it. All the best.

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 5:49:00 PM
    be gosh and be gorey micheal me lad, i'll be thankin' ya fer the shot and yer fine wordin' a yer prose. by the by i'll might be sharin' a pint with ya at the pub mayhaps! thankin' ya once agin'. Godspeed to ya now.

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 1:02:00 PM
    Welcome to our soup family. I wish you success in all your writing endeavours.keep writing

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 3:24:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Micheal. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/18/2009 5:44:00 PM
    Nice work! I look forward to reading your future posts

  1. Date: 10/18/2009 4:35:00 PM
    true love never dies... excellent poem.

  1. Date: 10/18/2009 3:12:00 PM
    Not sure which way to go with this one. Ghost and goblin story? Love one died? Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 10/18/2009 3:08:00 PM
    great poem, thanks for your comment on my poem. :) keep going! you have the potential!------Ell

  1. Date: 10/18/2009 3:04:00 PM
    Ahhhh, That's so sad and sweet. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks!