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Her Rhythm

The rhythm of you. You float, sway and dance graceful Like wind through the trees.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/4/2013 9:30:00 AM
well, dang it, you have been gone a long time. Please come back!
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Date: 5/11/2013 9:28:00 PM
Hello Rollo, hope you are well, and will be back soon...xox~ Linda
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Date: 4/15/2013 11:37:00 AM
Hi Rollo where are you and your wonderful words? xx
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Date: 3/17/2013 7:17:00 PM
How lovely you see someone this way, the description is enchanting! :)
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Date: 2/21/2013 9:04:00 PM
Beautiful, Rollo. Love it!
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Date: 2/19/2013 11:06:00 PM
oh rollo oh rollo, wherefor art thou, oh haiku master rollo??
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Date: 2/12/2013 8:59:00 AM
Really a romantic words here Rollo, great imaginary :) - hug, yanny
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Date: 2/12/2013 4:24:00 AM
Loved the imagery! Great write, my dear!
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Date: 2/11/2013 8:27:00 PM
Hello Rollo, i have my head like this in the clouds sometimes... Tomorrow... I will sway like the image above.. very lovely.. LINDA
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Date: 2/11/2013 5:52:00 PM
You paint such illustrious writes my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening! What a passionate piece, such a harmonious poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/11/2013 5:46:00 PM
yes, I hope my monoku was in your class of romantic writing, such as this one here!!
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