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Her Old Habits

Marble teeth with transparent grief,wearing her down that coat of brown,it keeps her warm from time to time,it's all she knows this girl of mine,it fits her well and holds her tight,perfect stitching with the needle in sight.

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Skat A

Date: 2/15/2015 9:49:00 AM

Karl :) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. Hope you had a wonderful Valentines day. ~SKAT LOVE~

Karl Mcdonnell
Date: 2/16/2015 12:23:00 PM

Thank you skat,really do appreciate that and I'm glad somebody liked it,cheers,hav a nice night.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/31/2015 1:29:00 AM

Karl, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@

Karl Mcdonnell
Date: 2/1/2015 9:40:00 PM

Thanks for the very lovely welcome and I'm very pleased to be apart of poetry soup. Thanks again Linda.

Skat A

Date: 1/31/2015 1:03:00 AM

Karl, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Karl Mcdonnell
Date: 2/1/2015 9:53:00 PM

Hey skat, can I just say thanks a mill for you're warm welcome into this comfortable spot in which I've found myself. I'm really enjoying reading some of the amazing work that's posted and I'll be sure to to check out yours aswell.

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 1/29/2015 2:39:00 PM

I wonder if all life is but habits both our own and inherited from ancestors or got from education and experience. Wonderful ABC in which is to be found a world entire not only personal recollections.Congrat.

Karl Mcdonnell
Date: 1/29/2015 4:49:00 PM

Thanks 4 that.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 1/28/2015 8:27:00 PM

excellent pen love the marble teeth karl

Karl Mcdonnell
Date: 1/28/2015 8:36:00 PM

Thanks Liam.