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Her Name Was Rain

Rain, if you were warm I would dance in you, I would be like the breeze and whip around you Rain, since you are cold I'll stay away from you Its such a bummer cause I want to play with you. Thoughts of running through the rain with you Makes my heart go insane for you I'll hold your hand and slow dance with you Alone in the grassy meadow just me and you What would I give to beat along with you Dripping on the tin shed of the roof with you Making sweet music on the wind chimes with you Wet and soft on a blanket in the fields with you Rain, I'd spend the entire night with you Enjoying the touch and feel of you No looking back when I'm with you Rain oh how I would love to dance in you Rain how intense is that storm the comes with you The thunder and lightening that stays with you Its okay because I still want to change with you Rain oh how I want to become one with you. ****************************************************************** Ayesha Karim Date: 5/25/2014 11:41:00 PM This poem is not so good. It is like a dramatic monologue. Be more poetic this is supposed to be a poem. Yikes!

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Date: 12/1/2014 12:04:00 PM
congrats on win with a your poem that sucks Tim and Cas:-) Hugs Jan x
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Date: 12/1/2014 8:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, you have to go back five pages to see the results for this poem. The comment on this poem makes no sense, I suspect it is a hoax. There are a very few fake accounts on here that like to cause waves. This is a fine poem beaufitly written.
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Date: 5/27/2014 6:50:00 PM
We wrote this while Casarah was in a rain storm.
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Date: 5/25/2014 11:41:00 PM
This poem is not so good. It is like a dramatic monologue. Be more poetic this is supposed to be a poem. Yikes!
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Date: 5/26/2014 11:15:00 AM
ayesha, I am sorry that you did not enjoy the poem. It is ranked 7th for this months hottest, however, so we will not change a drop of it. thank you for your opinion. not every one will like everything they read.

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